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I alrerady told you, but I'll repeat it here: the "waking" scene is a day-dream come true. Waking Sleeping Beauty up with your hands, your lips...and then making love...so sweet ans sensual.
ReplyDeleteA leopard can't change it's spots.
ReplyDeleteWith the exception of a few batshit crazy stories involving magic and vampires and whatnot- most every Michael Jackson fan-fiction is essentially the same: Heroine has a ~*exotic*~ ( see: horrible ) first name, has an abusive partner/ex-partner/family member that Michael must save her from, Michael falls in love with heroine minutes after meeting her, lyrics are incorporated into everyday conversations and sex scenes are awkward and uncomfortable for EVERYONE involved.
ReplyDeleteThis is sweet, although I hated that she ran away from him in the beginning. Don't do that to us, girl! LOL Now that Hunter is rid of her father, she can fully give herself to Michael as her husband. Can't wait to read the next installment. I like this calmer, more stable Michael. I wish this had happened to him for real.
ReplyDeleteSorry to scare you...drama drama and Momma Momma!
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